Image: It took me a while to figure out the top image as a word but that actually adds to the dimensions of the graphic. The shape references the bee hive and the colors are just as dynamic. I think the outline need to be a different width so there is line variety and a sense of lightness to the image. The 2nd one is very graphically interesting b the “B” is the least successful of the letters. Does it need to be a Capital? Also look at the space between the letters . The space between the two “E’s” is greater than the “B” ad the “E” Image and Word: I really believe this is an excellent solution, The bracketing of the graphic Bee is straight forward yet adds dimension to the logo. I would suggest the [ ] have thinner lines, presently they art a bit too heavy as they sit of the Bee text. The image with the [ ] on the right work better with regards to the negative space. Excellent work Letter: - or is this another word. I think the bottom word is graphically successful. You have placed the stripes in to the “ee” which give a flow and movement connecting the words. Why black. I might even do the letters in a very dark brown so soften the image so that it reflects the softness of the actual animal. Your choice of type face is very modern, bold and graphic. What about doing these as just the Letter B Word: The choice of type face is excellent, elegant and dynamic, showing the characteristics of the Bee. The dots coming off the end is a simple clever idea, but I might try for a more dynamic line shape. You could of taken a letter that has a curve similar to the First part of the capital B – traced it with the dots and been able to use the dots as a reflection of the shapes of the typeface.
JQ, you are doing great work. I impressed with your roughs and effort. I would just like to see a bit more explanation about why you are doing the logos - reasons and statements make for better artwork!
Beautiful, elegant with movement
ReplyDeleteI like the way the text flows; it's very... uh... I'm blanking on the English word for it. But how did you get the dotted lines at the end?
ReplyDeleteVery nice.
ReplyDeleteThanks you so much~~ :) Michelle I did that with pen tool and then I edited stroke just click stroke and then click dashline
ReplyDeleteImage: It took me a while to figure out the top image as a word but that actually adds to the dimensions of the graphic. The shape references the bee hive and the colors are just as dynamic. I think the outline need to be a different width so there is line variety and a sense of lightness to the image. The 2nd one is very graphically interesting b the “B” is the least successful of the letters. Does it need to be a Capital? Also look at the space between the letters . The space between the two “E’s” is greater than the “B” ad the “E”
ReplyDeleteImage and Word: I really believe this is an excellent solution, The bracketing of the graphic Bee is straight forward yet adds dimension to the logo. I would suggest the [ ] have thinner lines, presently they art a bit too heavy as they sit of the Bee text. The image with the [ ] on the right work better with regards to the negative space. Excellent work
Letter: - or is this another word. I think the bottom word is graphically successful. You have placed the stripes in to the “ee” which give a flow and movement connecting the words. Why black. I might even do the letters in a very dark brown so soften the image so that it reflects the softness of the actual animal. Your choice of type face is very modern, bold and graphic. What about doing these as just the Letter B
Word: The choice of type face is excellent, elegant and dynamic, showing the characteristics of the Bee. The dots coming off the end is a simple clever idea, but I might try for a more dynamic line shape. You could of taken a letter that has a curve similar to the First part of the capital B – traced it with the dots and been able to use the dots as a reflection of the shapes of the typeface.
JQ,
ReplyDeleteyou are doing great work. I impressed with your roughs and effort. I would just like to see a bit more explanation about why you are doing the logos - reasons and statements make for better artwork!